I really like the topic you chose because its very unique and you provide great information on Mars! You can really tell that you did a lot of research on the topic and I like how you presented the facts with enthusiasm. You were also very engaging and I found it very interesting how you mentioned that they are sending regular people to see if they can survive on Mars! Posing questions to the audience was also very beneficial because it makes you think about the information you are presenting. Overall this was a really great Ted Talk and my only critique would be to possibly add some background music or some pictures.
Awesome job Ashley! I agree with Andrea, it looks like you really did put a lot of research into this project, and you can definitely tell it's something you're passionate about! I like that you used facial expressions, gestures, and different tones when you were presenting. It made the presentation much more interesting and personal. I also think that you could add some pictures or music to show some of your hard work and research!
Great job! I agree with my the previous comments, you put in great effort and research into your Genius Hour topic. You engaged your audience. Overall job well done!
I really like the topic you chose because its very unique and you provide great information on Mars! You can really tell that you did a lot of research on the topic and I like how you presented the facts with enthusiasm. You were also very engaging and I found it very interesting how you mentioned that they are sending regular people to see if they can survive on Mars! Posing questions to the audience was also very beneficial because it makes you think about the information you are presenting. Overall this was a really great Ted Talk and my only critique would be to possibly add some background music or some pictures.
ReplyDeleteAwesome job Ashley! I agree with Andrea, it looks like you really did put a lot of research into this project, and you can definitely tell it's something you're passionate about! I like that you used facial expressions, gestures, and different tones when you were presenting. It made the presentation much more interesting and personal. I also think that you could add some pictures or music to show some of your hard work and research!
ReplyDeleteGreat job! I agree with my the previous comments, you put in great effort and research into your Genius Hour topic. You engaged your audience. Overall job well done!
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